I love what you did with this title and I am really glad that it inspired you to write this amazing piece.

Very deep poem, excellently written from the first to the last line. It can be interpreted on many different ways which is its true power.
I like the imagery that you portrayed in each stanza, it is vivid and effective.

I can relate to this poem in a way which made it more heartfelt for me.

Greatly done.
5/5