Aww so beautiful and so true. I can relate with the feeling of staying up before bed and dreaming of the "perfect boy," and wondering if he will feel for you as strongly as you feel for him or in your case she hahah. The questions of acceptane you asked were ones I've asked before therefore they took me back in time and I thought you wrote it nicely.

"If I really do dream you alive,
Are you going to stay by my side?,
Could you possibly survive,
After I decide to make you my bride?,"

^eveything in this stanza just flowed flawlessly and the imagery made it complete.

Overall a great read for me and a wonderful write from you. Well done *5/5*

*gasp* This poem is beautiful! Well done. Who ever you wrote this for, must be pretty amazing to have such a great poem written for her. :D