by Teria Mar 20, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
When The Last Leaf Fell. |
by jojo
I really liked it..but can i make a suggestion. Nothin big I was reading it over and I think the line "I won't beleive you, Not today" I was thinking it could be "I wouldn't beleive you anyway" because this line really expresses your anger...just a suggestion. |
:O that was really good. it was a very heartfelt read and your emotions were beautifully expressed. the last stanza was my favorite. =] 5/5 |