:O that was really good. it was a very heartfelt read and your emotions were beautifully expressed. the last stanza was my favorite. =] 5/5

I really liked it..but can i make a suggestion. Nothin big I was reading it over and I think the line "I won't beleive you, Not today" I was thinking it could be "I wouldn't beleive you anyway" because this line really expresses your anger...just a suggestion.

I was thinking maybe you could check out my poetry and give me some pointers because you seem like a really good writer...thanks