I had to add this to my favorites, this is one well writen poem. You keep me wanting to read more. 5/5

Wow, what a hot poem! Fantabulously sensual and sexy without being too forward and blunt. Flow was spot on and the rhyme was perfecto. My favourite stanza was:

"When you kiss me all else fades,
Your lips are all I know,
All I need or all I want,
Emotions overflow."

I love the way you carried the second line over to the third.

5/5

Em xXx