Crazy love

by StonedGooberz   Mar 20, 2008


Dreams untold by a thousand scars
But yet you still whisper within my head
Why do you love me truly I will never know
You help me hang on to sanity if only by a thread

Love some will say is made to hurt for a few times
So I guess thats why most amateur poets compare it to a rose
I don't think that flowers or parts of nature cannot quite do
Poetry for you keeps getting harder and harder to compose

The more I think about your simplistic touch
And the way your hair smells within the wind
The more I become lost in this crazy messed up world
Falling even more in love with you till I can't comprehend

They say I have lost my mind with anger I cannot control
I belong in a padded cell smothered by thoughts I can't elucidate
But yet again you're the only voice that whispers within my head
Maybe it's just another insane thought, but it's only you in which I can relate

So all I ask of you is to only simply hold my hand
Be the rope that holds me here again and again
Because it is you I wish to keep in my twisted life
Because it is you thy angel tears I see as more then a girlfriend

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    1st stanza 4th line "hang" should be "hanging" because it sounds better. Other then that it is a great poem. The flow was nice and I liked the word choice. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SilentlyDyingInside

    Great poem! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by khate

    Mind-boggling poem,.its so nice,5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is an amazing poem, one of the best I must say. Very nicely written and enjoyable to read! Have a great Easter!

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    The more I think about your simplistic touch
    And the way your hair smells within the wind
    The more I become lost in this crazy messed up world
    Falling even more in love with you till I can't comprehend

    I love this verse, great write, awesome read. 5/5

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