Good job Dennis, full of true emotions!

Unbelievable!! The imagery, the emotions, so beautifully written!! Going in my favs! 5/5

OMG Dennis! This makes me wanna hug you! This poem is perfect! It could be a song, everything in it, even though sad, is perfect, just perfect! 100/100
Love Erika

Your poem says she loved you too. Isn't it heartbreaking when two people in love fall back due to some circumstances? And wow! A man crying in the rain. So romantic. Nice work! 5/5

Amazing 5/5

OMG !!! This definitely will go to my fave poems..

Breaking up with romantic partner will always never seems to go well...And through this poem you have portrayed the level of your sadness, pain associated with the endin, and even guilt and self blame..

They say preventin yourself to grieve or cry will only prolong the pains..And i admire that line "you cryin in the rainin"..Give yourself and herself time to heal..

I know how much it hurts to see that person whom we are willing to die for leavin us coz of the unbearable pain that we had caused them...

Goodluck and wish you both the best..

WOW!!! Truly speechless. Its beautiful. 5/5

Wow that is and extremely well written poem, it's so beautiful, i give it a 5/5

That was beautiful, I cried.

This is really beautiful, it means a lot. i love how it reminds me of.."i like the rain because no one sees my tears". it is a great poem, easy flow and everything. good job babe! and as i know you will, keep up the good writes!

5/5

Beautiful, just beautiful! Reminded me a bit of Clapton's song 'Tears In Heaven' even though that was for his son. Putting this in my favorites for sure! 5/5

Oh hun, when I read this poem I started to cry, because at some point in my life I've felt everything you said in it. It really touched me and I think you've written it just perfectly!
5/5

This is one of most touching poems I've ever read!! The feelings of sadness and regret jumped right out and hit me square in the heart!! You truly amaze me with your writing at times hun, this is surely one of your best ever!! 5/5

Outstanding, got goose bumps all over....brilliant write

This was amazing. It was so touching. and i loved it. great write