I want

by Brittany C   Mar 20, 2008


I want you in my arm's
not just to night but every night.
When with you my heart truly sings
you make my days to bright.

I love your eyes of a blue so light.
I love the way you talk so sweet.
The way you whisper so soft
can make my body heat.

The look in your eyes
makes my bones weak.
I love those beautiful eyes.
I could look at them all week.

Of all the things I may not know.
I do know for sure that I love you.
I want you forever I know that too.

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  • 16 years ago

    by mandy

    The rhythm was a little shaky, but i loved
    your poem. I love how you used a lot of synonyms to really get detailed into your thoughts, I could get a really good understanding of your poem and your emotions you feel towards the persone you
    wrote about. For example, even if someone didn't have someone in there life, they could get a really good understanding of how it feels or how good it feels to you. Over all you did a great job,

    -Mandy 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "The way you whisper so quit"
    Should quit be quick? It just doesn't make that much sense. But, I really like this poem and I love the title. Thanks for commenting on my poem, and have a Happy Easter!

    P.S. I love your name, it is awesome!

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