"The way you whisper so quit"
Should quit be quick? It just doesn't make that much sense. But, I really like this poem and I love the title. Thanks for commenting on my poem, and have a Happy Easter!

P.S. I love your name, it is awesome!

The rhythm was a little shaky, but i loved
your poem. I love how you used a lot of synonyms to really get detailed into your thoughts, I could get a really good understanding of your poem and your emotions you feel towards the persone you
wrote about. For example, even if someone didn't have someone in there life, they could get a really good understanding of how it feels or how good it feels to you. Over all you did a great job,

-Mandy 5/5