by Crystal Gaze
Oh! Very nice. It was definitly not what I expected, and it made me love the piece more! |
Beautifully worded |
by Robert
I really enjoyed this piece the message was well done and the whole idea of you growing up together was a novel Idea great work Plot121 |
by khate
Its magnificent,..i really love it |
by Shinobi
This poem has a decent analogy between the tree and your character. This poem is unique as it describes your thoughts and feelings as the tree's. By that you show how lonely you were, as the tree was and how you suffered with him together. A very unique idea 5/5 |
by Amorita Maharaj
Excellent Poem! I just loved it.... Very creative :) |
A unique poem,but with a depth-makes one ponder,how lonely life can be.keep writing. |
This is a very unique poem that I enjoyed. The whole story is very interesting and you put such creativity in this poem. I liked how when you suffered, the tree suffered with you. Great work, keep writing, always and forever.... |