by withlove Mar 20, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I wrote this poem a while ago on 9/11 but i just really wanted to submit it and see what you guys think. Its different from most of mine being that it has no rhyme scheme whatsoever but I was in a wierd place at that time. |
by jane
Sad but very good..... |
Aww......so sad! i have been through something like that before it sucks but keep your head up 5/5 <33 |
by RB
That was so emotional and deep, i could feel everything you were writing about. very sad and heartbreaking. i like how it doesn't rhyme though, i think it makes it more real. extremely well done! 5/5 |