Crushed Once Again

by withlove   Mar 20, 2008


I wrote this poem a while ago on 9/11 but i just really wanted to submit it and see what you guys think. Its different from most of mine being that it has no rhyme scheme whatsoever but I was in a wierd place at that time.
hope you like it. =)

Do the promises that you made mean nothing?
you say that you always keep your word but so far I dont agree.
Yes these promises werent directly stated but they dont have to be.
You made me feel special and once again I thought that maybe this time could be different.
I was wrong.
You gave me hope and put long desired happiness within my reach and just took it away.
How could I believe that anything could ever go right.
I was trying to have faith but now I know the sad but true fact.
No matter the situation or number of people around me I will always be
ALONE.

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  • 16 years ago

    by jane

    Sad but very good.....

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Aww......so sad! i have been through something like that before it sucks but keep your head up 5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by RB

    That was so emotional and deep, i could feel everything you were writing about. very sad and heartbreaking. i like how it doesn't rhyme though, i think it makes it more real. extremely well done! 5/5