by RB
That was so emotional and deep, i could feel everything you were writing about. very sad and heartbreaking. i like how it doesn't rhyme though, i think it makes it more real. extremely well done! 5/5 |
Aww......so sad! i have been through something like that before it sucks but keep your head up 5/5 <33 |
by jane
Sad but very good..... |