Supressed anger! You can see why most people 'keep it all in' I believe through writing we can release some of that anger and share our wisdom with others.
You just have with me - thank you.

Michael 5/5

This is a very good poem nikkie, like the flow and the grammer is perfect, i give it a flawless 5/5!!! keep these great poems coming babe!!!

Now thats wat u call a really really good poem! really enjoyed that one best of luck! right more

Good job i could feel the raw fury emanating from this ones core keep it up!!5/5
Cory