Wow this is very emotional and well written poem. 5/5 is the best deal. You deserve it...

Your pain sorrows me. The poem in itself seems to be a great way for you to relinquish some of the horrors that you are living.

I hope that you will soon find happiness and continue to write.

When we are full of emotion and just trying to let those emotions out of our shell then there is no way one can judge.

The important fact is that you have found an outlet and that healing may continue on for you.

The rawness of your soul being exposed grips my heart and makes me wish that I could be there to hold you close.

May you find happiness

~~Sher

Wow! this is amazing! i can really picture what your going through.
great poem, well done

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Very discriptive and emotional.
it also projects the image to me.
like i can see it as it happens
very good work.
5/5

Well written poem, your despair is evident from start to finish. I am empathetic to your situation and wish you the very best. Keep writing and bringing us lovely pieces to read!