Another simple but brilliant job. well, you impress me too many times this day. I'm sad right now so I can relate to all of those!!! More 5/5

Damn you are AWESOME, I hope this is'nt happening to you, if you need someone to talk to just message me.

I've felt just like this myself a few times. I like that you wrote about trying to hide your sadness from people. it's a hard thing to do. but it's not something to do all of the time.trust me but good stuff =)

Wow, this poem is really magnificent and really touching.
I am so sorry friend, but this is life and we have to accept as it is, but i am ready that friend who you can share your sarrows with her.

Nice, I like how in the end of the poem you leave the impression that you hide all these sad emotions. Sometimes its hard to show sad emotions.

It flowed well, and was imaginative.