Memories

Sad poem but soo good <333

Overall this poem is good. I see a few changes that I would make to help the flow and draw the reader in more.
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Staring down an empty hallway
wondering what to do
every move that i make
brings back thoughts of you

^^
try: every move that is made

i cant sit in that spot anymore
where the first time that we kissed
i can remember we were so nervous
we almost nearly missed
^^^
Unable to sit in that spot
and
Able to remember how we were so nervous

and the first time you said i love you
you took me by surprise
and that time we had a 'moment'
where we looked into eachothers eyes
^^^
Taken me by surprise
that time we had a moment

one day when you stop and think
what have i done
i hope your happy you gave it a chance
we used to have so much fun
^^^
Hopefully your happy we gave it a chance

now that you have moved on
and my life is standing still
you know i've always loved you
and i always will
^^^
Life is standing still

Ok... sorry about the nit picks, as I said overall it was good and the meaning that I got while reading this was full of love.

~~Sher