I THOUGHT YOU LIKED ME
BUT NOW I DONT THINK YOU DO
SOMETIMES YOU ACT LIKE IT
BUT OTHERS YOU DON'T
I REALLY MISS THE WAY
YOU LOOKED AT ME
LIKE ALL THE TIMES YOU WOULD SEE ME
AND YOUR FACE WOULD LIGHT UP
DO REALLY LIKE ME OR DON'T YOU
I NEED TO KNOW THE TRUTH
BECAUSE LIES ALWAYS HURTS WORSE IN THE END
This was a good poem.
It was short though. I think you should add more because the title is very catchy and many girls can relate to this. I liked it. You should check your grammer and rhyme more. I think this poem will make a great rhyming poem.
4/5 Good job! :)