WOW... a beautiful and amazingly heartfelt poem... it was sooo close to bringing me to tears...I am so sorry if this poem is true - you put so much emotion into this poem.. it is just pouring out from every single word..

So please my dear Lord do answer my prayer,
He is my only true father I have no spare,

Those 2 lines are unbelievably sad and really hit me hard... this is such a powerful poem and sooo well written!

I need him by my side to hold me close forever,
You don't have to say yes just please don't say never.

The ending is FLAWLESS and perfect!! you couldnt have ended it any better..

But Lord I am screaming I don't know what to do,
^^That single line is soo powerful and I can really sense the frustration, anger, sadness, and so many other emotions brought on by this tragedy..

You don't have to say yes just please don't say never.

Amazing ending line.. ends the poem on a sort of hopeful note.

This poem is so beautiful and you did an amazing job reading this. If it's true I am sooo sorry.. be strong and keep writing. =)

This is a really good poem it made me cry i just lost my dad 3 days ago and im losin my mind without him here

This is excellent

it really keeps a strong emotion going through the entire thing

you finished tht so well its incredible

perfection

So please my dear Lord do answer my prayer,
He is my only true father I have no spare,

WOW!!!

i love it flawless.. amazing.. holy god that was a good read.. sad.. but amazing.. loved it.. thanks for sharing this poem

Well done
flow was nice ,and i love all of it as each part look different and in lovely way you write,sad and great 5/5

This was done very well! I lost my best friend awhile back and this made me cry. I write these same kind of poems. You might be able to relate to. Please read them.
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Ok wow this poem is sad as. i am sorry that you had this happen to you and i really feel your pain. i know what it is like to lose someone that you love so dearly. i hope things look up. you just got to live your life the way you think that your dad would want you to live.
i really felt the pain behind that poem just so you know
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This is a great poem!!! WEll done. Shows that you are really hurting. Sorry that you are feeling this!

This poem is sooo sad. If its true... I'm so sorry. I don't know what I would do without my father.. Your poem held a lot of emotion.. pain.. longing.. pleading.. I could feel it. Your rhyming was pretty good. There were only a few spots were it seemed slightly forced. And when you say: lye. it should be lie. But overall it was great. I think your best stanza was that last one. I literally went: wow. That last line just hit me. GREAT job

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Ohh that was really so much begging thoughts, well it really also sad and great words of expressing ur sadness and missing this person. very well written and well express.. keep on writing all what u feel 5/5