by Baby Rainbow
A better day will come soon xxxxxx |
by Lu
First off I would like to thank you for your honest critiques on my 3 poems, very much appreciated hun. |
I wouldn't say this piece is a lot less powerful, but perhaps a lot less intense. The second stanza is by far my favorite, once again, probably because of the flow. Once again you've used good words, especially when rhyming, which makes your pieces that little more original. |
by Abha
This one too narrates the agony one our pain which as humans we feel time to time.... |
by Gizmo
The first line is so cold, actually the whole poem is cold and sad and the exact feelings that you would have if someone you loved left, and you expressed it beautifully. |
by Brad Quammen
Short but sweet....or sad....you know what I mean,lol,Very well written as is all your work. ;) |