by SpEcIaLmE
Love the use of bigger words, it makes the poem so much more effective for i get sick of reading the same words over and over |
Where to begin? This poem was amazing. The beginning had me a little... intrigued. Then the flow picked it up and took off and it was just becoming an enjoyable read. Then it seemed to change pace slightly again... and ended with a nice twist. Not a major twist but something not expected from the start of this poem. I have to agree the length was a little bit much, but the pace change had me. I personally give this a 5/5. |
by KN
Wow, great poem. It's sad, but expressed so well. And there's something about the last line, "I miss you," that's so abrupt and honest because it seems somewhat separate from the rest. Great words and nice flow. 5/5 |
"He's trapped, a prisoner of his own thoughts |
Haha, I don't care if it's cliche... it's good. The flow was alright and the word usage was excellent. The concept itself was very interesting and I enjoyed reading it... 5/5 |
This really reminds me of the times I have fell into the pit I would have pulled someone out of if I could have. |