I will always love you

by SpEcIaLmE   Mar 21, 2008


Just the thought of losing u brings tears to my eyes,
I don't know what I would do if I ever lost you,
But that I don't need to worry about cause,
I will always be yours and I will stay by your side forever,

Without you I wouldn't be me,
You have brought me so much happiness,
More then I have ever known,
The laughter it's no longer fake, it's real,

You have given me a life and a future,
You have been there when I've cried,
And told me everything will be okay,
You have seen me laugh and you know that it is because of you I do,

I didn't think it was possible to love someone this much,
But every time I see your smile and hear you voice,
I fall deeper and deeper into love,
My love for you is unbreakable and indescribable,

I just want you to know,
That I am yours and always will be only yours,
I am your girl and your angel,
And you are my baby boy forever

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please rate and comment i wrote this for my boyfriend, i dont know if its excalty a poem but i would love to know what people think of it thanxs it would mean alot to me and i always return the favour

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  • 16 years ago

    by Anthony Duvalle

    This is really quite beautiful, and this is something i wood definately love to hear from a girl

    very good
    keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    "You have seen me laugh and you know that it is because of you I do"
    That "I do" part makes that one line repetitive, and it throws the stanza off. I suggest you take out the "I do"

    "My love for you is unbreakable and indescribable"
    This is kind of repetitive, too. Well, the "my love" part is and that throws the stanza off. Maybe you could trying re-wording it, like this. .
    "For this love I have is unbreakable and indescribeable"

    And the first stanza was off, but it also depends on how you read it. . Anyway, those were just some suggestions, you don't have to change your poem, kayz. :] Anyway, I can really relate to this poem. I feel the exact same way, but about my [ex]boyfriend. :[ [he moved away last year] But I deal. So nice write. 5/5, still. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by khate

    Its great,.love it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by devils angel sunrise

    Very good strong meaning and its well writen and from what i can tell its writen from the heart and thats the only true poetry good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked it. thought the flow was a little off and the word choice was ok. 4/5
    it was a good poem though

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