A dream about you

by noha   Mar 21, 2008


I had a dream about you last night,
oh how everything seemed so right...
together we were having so much fun,
somewhere underneath the summer sun...
seeing your bright smile so clear to me,
with your eyes so beautiful as can be...

Imagination running wild and free,
a magical dream so real to me...
to hold you close and feel your love,
was so tender and sweet from above...
I did not want to wake and have it end,
this dream I had of a dear friend...

Is it wrong to feel this way,
about a dream that occurs every other day...
touching my soul playing with my mind,
happiness I'm searching for and hoping to find...
a dream I love it seems so real,
that each time I wake I do feel...

The love in my heart a smile on my face,
because I've found true happiness some other place...
not complaining nor will I ever deny,
the feeling that's coming upon I...
for now it's just a dream to me,
in a far away world I do for see...

i dream about you amr before i saw you
i realy love you
my dream come true

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  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    As compared to the poems that i've read i think you can put more imaginations and ideas with this one..you can improve it more. nice flow and nice thought

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    It mean that i love someone (amr) before i saw him,and i will put commas thanks for the point of view

  • 16 years ago

    by MEGZ is wondering what to do about life

    I dream about you amr before i saw you
    what does that mean?

    and when you write if you would put commas in it it would be a lot easier to read.

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Throughout the piece, the word "Cliche" kept coming to mind, although it wasn't quite original to me, it was quite good. A few typos here and there, and there are a few awkward lines. Work on your syllabication -- that seems to be the largest problem here (which isn't actually that large). Keep working at it.

    --..MiNDYY

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    The love in my heart a smile on my face,

    ^ aww that line was just so beautiful just like the emotions and imagery throughout your whole piece. I could truly feel the love you felt when writing this piece. Well done *5/5*

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