I really liked this one keep up the awesome work 5/5

*~*bee*~*

Well done

Ahhh yes...the world we enter when our heart's been broken. Nothing matters anymore...until that day when love finds us once again...and we do it all over :)

That was good. You brought a lot of emotion throughout the whole matter.

useless
motionless
thoughtless
all because I'm heartless

This was awesome, you rhymed so well, yet so sad.

Touch the poet's inner heart.

Great JOB! 5.5

This was great, loved the last part!

I really like this poem.

Nice! very touchy:O)

Very creative poem. nice work