Good work ally but i see words write wrong, as you write fast so next time try to read it once before you submit,and i see that you are good poet, and i love the story and i love when you said:That there will be nothing left to find.keep write

This poem was nothing new to me. It was the same kind angst-ridden poetry that, now and again, some of us are consumed into and reach a certain comfort in writing it. I was disappointed, because I was hoping for something wonderful. HOWEVER, in saying that, I do like how your rhyming here came perfectly naturally and nothing seemed forced.

:)

This was pretty good it just seems like it needs more description and more emotion to it

but the idea is really good

I don't think the paint has dried on this one yet. It could use a little more emotion and words that may be harder to find than what was written. I did like it overall though.

It shows great emotions tell the haters at the top to stop hatein and get a life!

This poem is amazing.It has a lot of emotion and depth.It was beautifully written.The ryhming didn't seem forced except for the last stanza.Maybe put something like she has finally soured or something.I don't know,just a suggestion. :) I loved it, just like all the other's.
Keep writing,
Rado

Very nice writen , i like the questionary type ,i envy you can express like this