Comments : I Walk Alone

  • 20 years ago

    by East Poetry

    I gave your first peom a 4 and i gave this one a 5, this one flows smoothly together and is very touching

    I may have found a small mess up though

    in the second or third to last segment you have: together were

    should it be? together where

  • 20 years ago

    by East Poetry

    or maybe i could suggest

    you have:

    the nights when we
    together were
    when we just had
    nothing to care

    nights when we were
    together where
    we just had
    nothing to care

  • 20 years ago

    by heather

    gr8 poem keep up the good work

  • 20 years ago

    by Jo

    Realy great poem, nice one :-)

  • 20 years ago

    by The Saint

    i like your variant Randy.
    i don't know if what i wrote is correct in English. "together were". what i mean to say is "when we were together" but i couldn't find a better sentence topic (my English knowledge has some limits... for the moment)

  • 20 years ago

    by hayley williams

    exceptional poem with fantastic rhyming style, iliked this alot!