by East Poetry
I gave your first peom a 4 and i gave this one a 5, this one flows smoothly together and is very touching |
by East Poetry
or maybe i could suggest |
by heather
gr8 poem keep up the good work |
by Jo
Realy great poem, nice one :-) |
by The Saint
i like your variant Randy. |
exceptional poem with fantastic rhyming style, iliked this alot! |