by Dark Savior Mar 21, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
She waits for him as she looks into the dresser drawer |
Very nice. I like how it turns out that the husband wasn't really cheating. You would think, though, that she would remember which perfume her friends uses. I was reading it, and when I reached the ending, I laughed a little inside, not because it was funny, persay, but because it just figured that she would have gone out and slept with another man just because she thought her husband was doing the same thing. It was a twisted case of irony at work. I loved the flow of it, and the rhymes were good as well. 5/5 |
by Meena Krish
Ohh dear..that was a real blow to the heart!! This really tugged at my heart...truly sad as well as painful.. |
by Cara
I really like this.. its so sad. so meaningful. revenge is a horrible thing.. it really is. |
by Mister 47
It is the best totaly the best poem i have ever read , the story is amaising , and i dont care about teh poetic syllabels and stuff , it was jsut amazing thing !! |