It is the best totaly the best poem i have ever read , the story is amaising , and i dont care about teh poetic syllabels and stuff , it was jsut amazing thing !!

great job , it was like a touch that flip from blaming the husband to a fatal mistake !!

waht a great one !!

bravo !

I really like this.. its so sad. so meaningful. revenge is a horrible thing.. it really is.

She rushed to the bathroom as it all began to sank in
was she going to hell if she committed this sin?

^^ was sank meant to be sink?

very well done.. i love it.

5/5

Ohh dear..that was a real blow to the heart!! This really tugged at my heart...truly sad as well as painful..
take care.

Very nice. I like how it turns out that the husband wasn't really cheating. You would think, though, that she would remember which perfume her friends uses. I was reading it, and when I reached the ending, I laughed a little inside, not because it was funny, persay, but because it just figured that she would have gone out and slept with another man just because she thought her husband was doing the same thing. It was a twisted case of irony at work. I loved the flow of it, and the rhymes were good as well. 5/5