This piece was absolutely perfect. It's flawless. The flow was flawless and your descriptions and imagery were outstanding. The poem was very well written and very well thought out. You definitely put your heart into this poem and it really shows. Perfectly written, amazingly done. 5/5.

I really liked it. and i love you imagery. but i felt that the flow was a little off kinda like you were trying to hard to make it say what you wanted instead of what you felt. Poems should be made they should just be. Like they exist in your heart and all you are doing is writing them down. But over all it was really good. Just next time take a deep breath and let the poem come from your heart.

Beautiful, full of feeling and pain,tears as you write and its so clear , flow is good and i love how you start by falling,but we dont know the end , i like it and you got wide imagination, well done 5/ 5

You got one amazing imagination there :) I loved it, it's so deep and we can really feel it. I felt the ryhming to me sounded forced a little tiny bit.. But other than that.. Execellent poem my dear. Fantastic

XoOrdinaryGirloX

I didn't expect your poem to end that way...the end caught my by surprise. None the less I thuroughly enjoyed your poem.