by Mike Wilburn Mar 21, 2008
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
My love is empty, lost and adrift |
by Abha
Unity dances amid acceptance and regret |
by Rachel RTVW
Although not my genre of choice, I do love your free verse poems. This piece delivered a very meaningful message and you have an awesome word choice. I love the way it ended, though I would shorten the last line a bit for the sake of flow: |