Comments : The Finish Line Of Broken Hearts

  • 16 years ago

    by mandy

    That was very well written, I seariously don't know what to write here, except the fact that this poem is absalutly amazing, filled with such emotion, I'm speachless, (even though you can't hear me :P ) fantastic job, a defanit 5/5

    -mandy

  • 16 years ago

    by m i s s k a t e l y n

    Wow, so much emotion.
    nice writing.
    it could use a better layout though,
    but still it was amazing 4/5

    <3katelyn.

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wonderful poem and so deep.

    i hope that person understands or else he will call you "cheater" the rest of his life