This poem needs a title as much as i need you

Very sweet write, nice emotion, the only advice I can offer is to work on your flow, keep your syllables closer together, so it reads smoothly. I have used your second stanza as an example, if I were going to rewrite it, it might be a little something like this:

I love the way you laugh
I love the way you sing
I love the light you bring my life
Forgetting everything

Hope I have helped. Good work.

Awe, this was so sweet and very beautifully written. A lot of passion and emotion in this piece, which you expressed clearly and deeply. The flow was a bit rocky here and there, but a great poem. :] A heartfelt write, an enjoyable read. :] 5/5.

Nice, really nice, i really wish those words were being said to me.. Good work and what a lucky guy.

The title could be like "the perfect relationship" or something cause thats how you write it out to be. Btw, i really like it :)