Your words were simple, but deep. there's so much meaning in this piece and i completely agree. the last stanza really drew in a lot of emotions. 5/5 keep it up. =]]

Thats exactly what I like to see out of a poem. Spectacular write! Although it was a simple poem, it held a lot of meaning. And this poem was meant to persuade people. Being able to use words to influence people while using a lot of feeling... Thats what poetry is about! And thats exactly what this did. Amazing job... 10/5

I really liked this poem. Normally poems that have such short lines bore me, but I think you did a really nice job. I liked this metaphor "Having underwear
But wearing an uncomfortable thong" and found it humorous. However, you were able to add that without disrupting the seriousness of the whole poem. Nice job.=]

You said exactly how I've felt before. I hate the word discrimination, it's horrid. Again a wonderful piece :) 5/5 x