I hope you never felt this bad before. it's terrible to think about hurting yourself like this. but I could see how sad this poem is. I know how bad it can be when you get too upset. be careful. =)

Lmao, I love how you spelled wh0r3 and assumed that people didn't get it. That really cracked me up. And I liked that line regardless. "The knife begging like a wh0r3" really kinda made me laugh, but was effective at the same time.

Onto the poem...
It was very good and well-written. Your word usage was effective and showed a lot of imagery. :) I really enjoyed reading this poem. It deserves a 5/5!

No longer clear
but, for now, I'm still here.
thatz my fav part. itz very strong...very good :) 5/5 i dun rly no how to explain ur poetry, except for good and ya lol itz wonderful ^^

--**Skye~

I think the flow was gd in some parts but overall the poem was a great poem
loved the line about the knife not meeting your skin and you not crying.
brilliant use of words.
enough said haha
5/5
xx

This ones really good
its got a good flow thats easy to follow

My skin is aching to bleed one more,
`Once
somethings wrong tonight.
`Apostrophe, dear.
While thinking I put it down,
not wanting to be under a dirt mound.
`That rhyme sounds extremely forced.

The word "knife" was used so many times, it took away from the poem's meaning for me. The flow was rocky. There were short stanzas and then longer ones and then short ones again -- it threw me off track. A couple of the rhymes sound forced. I think a little work with syllabication will make this poem a lot better. I do like how you end it though .

Overall, it was okay. But quite awkward .

--..MiNDYY

For me its great,..i like the way you started it,and also the way you ended it,.5/5

This is realy good and you done great jop i love when you say:Tears have not come yet,
knife and skin have not met.

Trying to stop my self abuse,
keep my blade out of use.

Yet I feel my day's not done,
even with the setting sun.
great 5/5

Great write. I like the almost childish rhyme and the mature theme to it.. It's really contradicting in a good way.. I like it. 5/5 from me..

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