Lost Forever

by X Harlea X   Mar 22, 2008


I am lost in a forest of hate,
running around like an idiot.

lost in a forest of broken hearts,
seeing my own pain.

now i am finally through,
though i don't want to.

i finally jump into the river,
and drown myself.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Adam RIP Lesthat and Cody Hayden

    Great job on this but dont do it.
    ;) lesthat

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Sorry, but this wan't good in my opinion. I thin a little more power and thought needs to be injected into your work. If you're not going to rhyme, I think you have to work extra, extra hard to accomplish a really good poem.

    Brad

  • 16 years ago

    by Scared to say I LOVE YOU

    Awww.... thts soo sadd!!!

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