Comments : Little Truth, Shooting Stars, Tempting Fate, and Healing Scars

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    YAY!

  • 16 years ago

    by RB

    Tempting fate...loved that! this was a lot more upbeat than some of ur more recent stuff. it was great.

    "Fingers crossed
    Shooting stars
    Tempting fate
    And healing scars"

    I loved that stanza and i loved how it was also the title. like 20/5..i swear!!! its beautiful!

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Aww. "never regret something that made you smile" and fate is a crazy thing that no1 can understand, that's wat makes life so unpredictable. just hang in there and let that huge heart of urs heal, b/c we all love that heart of urs and wen it breaks, so does ours.
    5/5
    xoxo
    ~me~

  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    That was good I think the only thing that kinda spolied it for me was when you said this poem won't end badly I kinda like to be kept in suspense until the end But nonetheless I liked it.

    But I really liked the last stanza.
    Good job.