Awwww... its so cute but really sad.. i mean a nice sad.. keep it up..:D
Fillie

It's about my boyfriend killing himself. But thanks.

This poem gave me chills..It was amazingly written && had a good story line!

Wow!..this made me cry.......tear!!..i'm sorry for ur loss...and i don't know what is like to lose some1, but i really am sorryy........once again this poem shul be 5..not 4.4.......great job!
5/5
***aLy***

Amazing i dont know what i would do if something like that happen to me. excellent piece it is truthfully written from ur heart. it shows ur emotional attachment to ur work keep it up.

I read your profile, and I'm really sorry this happened to you.

It's stunning how well you wrote this. It's a strong reminder that drugs are scary things to be messing with.

OMG..i'm sooo sorry for your loss, that must be the worst thing ever, i dont know how it feels to lose someone so close to you, i dont know what i'd do if i lost my boyfriend that way, god bless Kail, and good luck to you in the future, and awesome poem it showed so much emotion and pain, you write really well, keep up the good work.

Omg...this is so sad..and i'm so sorry this happened to you. You sound like a such a sweetie who didnt deserve. So about the poem..lol this is so strong and powerful. I could'nt even believe it when I read it. Amazing poem...5/5

Very tragic but wel written poem. I would not change a thing

Wow, that is a very good poem. It is a very tragic thing, but you chronicled it very well.

i liked the point of view

Wow..this is beautiful...thats what poetry is...its letting people know how you feel. I'm sorry for what happened. I have a boyfriend that I've been with for a very long time and I love him more than the world could ever know....I wouldn't know how to take it if something were to happen to him...so for you to be strong and write about it...your an inspiration.Great job... and keep writing.

keani lovez koa

By god....so deep...so true...anyone who knows a suicide victim could relate...such as myself. your wrods speak beautifuly as if you where sinde the victims mind. a poem in the form of a suicide note....brillient<3

This is a great example of what it can cost to do drugs well written and a powerful warnig for those who believe they control the habits that control them
thanks for sharing

Let me first say I'm so sorry for your loss I have never lost someone to suicide But I lost a boyfriend to a motorcycle accident and another to a car accident so I do share your pain, I thought you did an amazing job on this poem, be strong and keep writing....

I love this poem! You have to read between the lines to get the full meaning of it. I would like to read more poems by you.

Hey!! you are really nice poet keep up this good work :)

Do you read The Kiss - by Leigh Anne Dawson. if no its here :-

The Kiss
by Leigh Anne Dawson

Wanting to be held, loved, adored -
To be kissed
Like lovers on a movie screen.
Needing the reassurance,
Those feelings of bliss . . .
That can only be evoked
By the passion of such a kiss.
To feel the epitome of love,
Not from words but a touch,
Those butterflies in my stomach
And those small cold chill bumps.
So hold me, and kiss me,
Show me once more
What feelings are evoked in you
When near the one you adore.

*****

Well I wrote the above poem because your poem and his poem have a little similarity... Anyway, you write really nice... Keep up this good work

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WAHHHH I am crying! ;^; Amazing I tell you!