You Know Who You Are.
-- Right from the beginning you totally have me. It's a strong and accusing sentence. Really intriguing to the reader.
Love is a bandaged,
that dies in your arms.
Never finding peace,
in the buzzer and alarm.
-- Love this idea, only the first line seems wrong. Like there's a grammatical error.
Snooze doesn't help,
it only makes it worse.
With five minute naps,
and a hell of a curse.
-- This reminds me of my mornings before school =P But I love the rhyming here.
When you finally awake,
you're in for a day -
one not worth walking,
but you go on your way.
-- I know that feeling. You just have this bad feeling about a day, or you just don't want to face it, but you have to get up anyways.
Charming the world,
with every fake smile.
Walking the roads,
for too long awhile.
-- Love this. Can't even really explain what about it I love, I just really like it.
You're fighting back tears,
for all that you're worth.
You know who you are,
ruining this earth.
-- I'm not sure I follow the message you're sending out here, but I love the first two lines of this stanza...the very last one seems almost forced, but see if I understood where you were going, I might not think that. So pretty much ignore me in this case =P
Overall it's an awesome poem. Strong and classy. The rhyming and flow are wonderful.
Keep it up =]
5/5.