Aww, thats really good keep it up x

Juz rEadiN thIs, MaKes My HeArt wEep...sO tOuchIn, sO heArtBreakiNg..tHe PictuRe wAs LuCid aLL thrOughOut tHe pOem..I Love tHis One..You OftenLy expreSsed What yOure gOin thrOugH juZ liKe whaT i'Ve sAid EarLieR..And tHe unEven StruCtuRe oF yOur pOem Made It aN inTerEstiNg oNe..

NiCe wOrk..KeEp iT uP...5/5

How sad, i dont think i have read a poem about the snow season being bad and lonely before.. but you really painted a picture of loneliness in my mind. The imagery was amazing. It really brought my spirits down, which i guess means the poem was very well written. The structure was interesting and the flow was good. A very good write, once again.
5/5