by Feels Like Ecstacy Mar 22, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
-not a very good poem, just needed to get some stuff off my chest.. |
Yup, sure does have a lot of emotion in it. U did absolutely great on it. ;-) |
by william
I like it. ful of powerful emotions |
Great poem. alot of emotion and good flow. 5/5 |
by Ares
It's a really good write and it paints pictures in the reader's mind. Always a good treat:) |
:) It's a very good write, and I enjoyed reading it. Especially the end! "I think with my entitlement, I should." Very nice. :) And if this was based off of real events, I do wish you feel better. :) And thanks for the comment. :) 5/5 |