Omgoshhhh!!
This Is So Pretty!

And Yes I Have Had T hat Happen!

I Like This One Alot!!!
It Expresses Your Emotions Alot!!
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Wow.
powerful poem.
great use of words, and emotions

yeah, can really relate to this.

I LOVE THiS POEM...
iT REALly TELlS ME....
yOUR A GREAt POET...
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That was really good. I loved it! it makes u a great writer with the fact that u can relate to more than just urself every grl that read this (maybe a some guys) can totally relate to this u did a great job ur a really good writter! keep uo the work! 5/5 always
Kate~

Great poem...

I liked this poem, i feel like that at times. Great work.

I can relate to this one alot. its happened to me only once but it hurt like hell! keep going on with life cause you will be loved in return one day! you deserve it!
love Emmy
xoxo

Because deep inside we all just want to be loved in return.
But we're afraid, because in the end we fear we might get burned.

those too lines summed up the whole reason why too few truly find love. Great work

I liked the repetition of questions it added to the meaning/emphasis
unfortunately i think a lot of girls can relate
your a fantastic writer! 5/5 <3

5/5 omg i can totally relate to this poem..no matter what i do i cant seem to forget this dude he juzt is apart of me...newayz gurl keep writing cuz u are so dang good at it!

much luv
peachez

This was really good, I can certainly relate to it. Great job! I read a few of your poems and this one is certainly my favourite! 5/5
And thanks for the comment, you're my first!

Yes I have felt like this and it hurts too much.
I can relate so much to this poem.
great work!

One of my fav poems I really lyke this one.....and I feel ur pain when u loved sum1 who doesn't feel the same

I love the rhyming to this poem it is very good you are good at that

I like it i meber i felt that way the longest time
pretty good keep i hope went ok

Aw!!..i liked it. and its all true!
i understand completely because im kinda in that situation where i don t think this one guy likes me as much as i like him...

but anyways, i think the last stanza needs a tad bit of work. it's stated so matter-of-factly that it doesnt seem poemy. but otherwise i loved the poem!..great job!
5/5
Aly

Wow, I really loved this! You expressed your feelings perfectly and you wrote so this so beautifully. This was my favorite part:

"Have you ever promised your self,
I'm over this person once and for all.
Then all it took was one look,
And once again you'd fall."

Your whole poem said so much, and you got the message across clear, so nice job on this!

So the way i feel nw!

Beautiful, and yes of course i understand!