Comments : The world I created

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats really powerful x

  • 16 years ago

    by Grace

    I loved it =p

  • 15 years ago

    by Aveena

    Its really nice
    ^^ yeah it is very powwerfull

    -thanks for the comment.
    -*aveena

  • 15 years ago

    by cici89

    In order to exclude bad,
    Kinda lost a little flow here

    didn't let nobody come in
    Maybe try didnt let anybody come in

    Other than those two lines i thougt it was amazing and you did a very vey good job. Your readers can feel the emotion you placed within.
    thanx for the comment

    suicidalkansas

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    I can relate to this alot. We all build walls etc. Well written, 5/5. Em