Bravo ... Excellent poem!
i loved it...
keep up the good work
x

So I hold my head up high
Trying to hide
The fact that I am breaking down
And I am tearing up inside

Nothing will get to me
Nothing will get to me
I say over and over
As I cry myself to sleep

God I hope one day soon
I will even convince my heart
That nothing will get to me
Except the way you tear me apart

I really liekd these 3 stanzas bc I can relate to them espceillay right now. the whole i try to hide im brokeninside is A thing I do all the time.

Good Job!

Great poem i understood the meaning but when it came to the last line i got confuse but its a great poem keep writing...5/5