This is a good beginning...but I'm sure you're capable of coming up with much more. Expand your horizons a bit...if this is what you truly wish for....there's got to be a lot more you have to say :)

I loved this, i really relate and understand how this feels. i believe u have alot of talent so just trust yourself and u can write beautiful things.

Good luck with everything
tamara

This poem is so wonderful, you have talent! I love your words, but I think you could make it longer, and put more emotion to it, to make it better. Keep Writing!

This is a very good poem, it flows really well, and you can feel true emotion. I think you should continue with it and make it longer though.