Climbing

by StandStill   Mar 22, 2008


Lost in my own world
so grey and sad
climbing, trying to get out
i need to get out so bad

my skin is calling for the sunshine
and my heart needs to smile
but I'm climbing, climbing, climbing
and i have been for a while

crawling around in this dingy place
i quickly realized
that i couldn't see anything
because i had yet to open my eyes

so i stood up and i looked around
and the world that i did see
it was so dark, so dim
down right drury

so i decided to climb
out of this little grey place
and try to get out
before another fall from grace

and now i am climbing
probably have been for miles
but a pinpoint of light on the horizon
makes it all worth while

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  • 16 years ago

    by girlnextdoor

    Beautiful, it amazes me how you have written 300 poems, and they're all so amazing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    *highfive*

    yaaaaaaayyyyyyyy

    im so happy gabby, this made me happier, great poem, great.

  • 16 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Nice...
    it has hidden meanings in the poem!
    like the "pin point of light", can mean anything
    but you do have some spelling mistakes if you want to check them out!
    keep it up

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