Comments : One World

  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    Wow. This is awesome.

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats really good, well done on this and really powerful words xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by mimzy

    Excellent poem. Love the last part:

    Towards the stars, and in the sadness of night
    Falling back to earth in the morning light,
    That awakens me from the one world you are mine
    Though you co-exist five hours forward in time.

    Beautiful