Vomit for Validation

by WrittenInTheStars   Mar 23, 2008


I feel my thoughts becoming actions;
each second that passes
makes me want to commit this
secret act I hold so dear.

I cease to think about anything else,
hurriedly I walk to the bathroom
impatient for what is to come.
I stand before the toilet,
fingers down my throat.

My worries and emotions take the form of
peanut butter and cookies,
chips and crackers,
cupcakes and brownies.

Now they are a brown, fluid mess
collected in the perfectly white toilet bowl,
soon to be guiltlessly flushed away,
never to be seen again.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Very descriptive. i can understand what you were feeling when you wrote this. it is wonderful. i really liked at the beginning

    'I feel my thoughts becoming actions;
    Each second that passes'

    it is very nice (well nice is the wrong word but i dont know how to describe it)5/5
    keep writing
    ~KM~

  • 16 years ago

    by Paralyzed

    I thought this was a pretty good piece, i think you could have been a bit more creative with your wording, but the rawness is there. Very graphic and poignant, I think you did a really good job and I like the title as well. Keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    Wow, Yelp. I been in a medical course in a about 6months now. And i have a little knowledge about this disorder, Yap this is a very threatening disorder. It was very sad indeed. And you can surpass this. Take care!

    Keep on writing
    Veamm

  • 16 years ago

    by sweet escape

    Once a gain i feel the flow is off with the varried amounts of syllables but it is still good.

  • 16 years ago

    by sweet escape

    Liked how 'real' it was.

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