Thats graphic! this is really good hunny, ive been there and i felt the emotion in that. well done and keep writing xxx

Liked how 'real' it was.

Once a gain i feel the flow is off with the varried amounts of syllables but it is still good.

Excellent!

Wow, Yelp. I been in a medical course in a about 6months now. And i have a little knowledge about this disorder, Yap this is a very threatening disorder. It was very sad indeed. And you can surpass this. Take care!

Keep on writing
Veamm

I thought this was a pretty good piece, i think you could have been a bit more creative with your wording, but the rawness is there. Very graphic and poignant, I think you did a really good job and I like the title as well. Keep up the good work.

Very descriptive. i can understand what you were feeling when you wrote this. it is wonderful. i really liked at the beginning

'I feel my thoughts becoming actions;
Each second that passes'

it is very nice (well nice is the wrong word but i dont know how to describe it)5/5
keep writing
~KM~