I'm writting a short story...P1..let me know wat you think

Her eyes close, she inhales, exhales and within these 10 seconds tears begin to run down her cheeks, her tears leave a trail of mascara. she opens her eyes, breathing in heavily, she leans back and rests her head against the door, that she locked purposely in case Jessica finally realized that her phone was off and calling was useless, pointless and an obvious waste of her so called girl Friends time.

she closes her eyes again. gently shake head and debates own sanity, how could she be so stupid as to rip out her heart and place it in anothers hands! she new it would happen again, Jessica did it once beofre, its the same sh*t just a different week. a knock at the door breaks her chain of self-destructive thought. A familure voice, Jess's voice speeks to her in a tone just louder than a whisper. You can hear the tears in every word that comes for her mouth. Jessicas words sound like a blur of noises, none of which make any sense. All of a sudden the place falls quiet and she can hear Jessica crying. she closes her eyes and tries to escape the noise of falling tears and deceptive apologies but with the sound of every sniff and every small movment on the other side of the door her day dreaming attempts are bought to a hault...