Comments : Ritual

  • 16 years ago

    by Perfectly Broken

    This poem was really good. and i can picture all the things that were going on in this piece. and it's really sad that this actually happens, and [more than] half the time, people don't notice. =[ anyway, a great write. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CHOKE

    It's true that a lot of people don't notice. so, what does it hurt? im not gonna say that people shouldn't do it because i have no room. i, myself, have a lot of poems about this subject. i've had experience with it. anyway, 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Omg, its liek reading myself through this, wow, you have done a good job honest. well done again and keep writing hunny xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I notice that all your poems [so far] are about bulimia, and I just want to say I'm really sorry if you are having to suffer with this disease. I honestly don't really know what to say about this poem, because I cannot really relate to it. I can't say it's a bad poem, because it comes from your own personal feelings and experiences, and I have no right to judge you on that.

    I just say well done for being able to express your emotions on this subject, and once again, I hope you get better. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by CHEMICALcaitlin

    I liked this poem because it had the "realness" to it if you know what i mean. I can't imagine going through this. 5/5 =)

    Caitlin

  • 16 years ago

    by Bugg

    Aww, I could see these things happening, but so quickly. Usually the person eats for hours and hours before they feel like they need to purge, right? That was really my only thought on this poem. But I thought it was really good, too. 5/5

    *I already rrc Happy Birthday Bulimia, so I did this one instead. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    I can almost see the girl doing this. it is wonderful and very well written. good job. 5/5
    ~KM~