This poem was really good. and i can picture all the things that were going on in this piece. and it's really sad that this actually happens, and [more than] half the time, people don't notice. =[ anyway, a great write. 5/5 |
by CHOKE
It's true that a lot of people don't notice. so, what does it hurt? im not gonna say that people shouldn't do it because i have no room. i, myself, have a lot of poems about this subject. i've had experience with it. anyway, 5/5. |
by Baby Rainbow
Omg, its liek reading myself through this, wow, you have done a good job honest. well done again and keep writing hunny xxx |
I notice that all your poems [so far] are about bulimia, and I just want to say I'm really sorry if you are having to suffer with this disease. I honestly don't really know what to say about this poem, because I cannot really relate to it. I can't say it's a bad poem, because it comes from your own personal feelings and experiences, and I have no right to judge you on that. |
I liked this poem because it had the "realness" to it if you know what i mean. I can't imagine going through this. 5/5 =) |
by Bugg
Aww, I could see these things happening, but so quickly. Usually the person eats for hours and hours before they feel like they need to purge, right? That was really my only thought on this poem. But I thought it was really good, too. 5/5 |
by Kimberley
I can almost see the girl doing this. it is wonderful and very well written. good job. 5/5 |