Broken smile

by sweet escape   Mar 23, 2008


The man in the moon smiling brightly at me,
as I watch him rise and set over the sea.

Smile back, I can not,
for my life is not what I thought.

I see many smiles throughout the day,
but the one that matters, long ago, went away.

No longer able to feel joy since he broke my heart,
took my smile and ripped it apart.

Gave him all the love I had to give,
he made me wish I could no longer live.

Never once did he return my love.
Like an angel from above,

I watch every night as I weep over him,
and as he sleeps easy in the dim.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I liked it but it was a bit I'm not sure bouncy for my taste.

    I didn't feel anything I think was my problem.

    Maybe put in some more emotional words would bring this poem to new meanings.

    3/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Good poem. Many girls out there could relate to this. Almost everyone here is with broken hearts (awww including me, lol.) Beautiful poem, girl. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Waw its so sad and sweet and my boyfrind left me and this how i feel, nice choice of words and nice flow 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Punk Princess

    Awwww, one day you will find the right guy that is going to fix that smile =] I loved the poem it was fantastic !

  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    Aww.. it's so sad, but it's amazing. Cheer up sweetie, and keep on writing.

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